Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat foot at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Deciding whether or not eating food in a restaurant or at home, depends on your lifestyle. Eating at home is healthier and it can be more fun if you like cooking. But sometimes when going out with your friends you may enjoy your time by eating at a restaurant. I myself mostly like to eat at home but in some conditions or at weekends I like to go out with my friends and eat at a restaurant.
Eating at home has lots of benefits. I like cooking and making new things. So I like to spend time in the kitchen and make food for myself. Mixing all the ingredients and chopping gets me excited. Another fact that I like eating at home is that I know that I am eating healthy food. Many of the restaurants use old and low quality materials. But when I am at home I know what I am eating. Event sometimes I invite my friends to gather in my place and make the meal.
Eating in restaurants is inevitable. If you get caught up at work and don’t have enough time, you may have to go to a restaurant. Sometimes when you are out with your friends and want to enjoy your time out, you may prefer to go to a fancy restaurant and eat new foods. I like to taste new foods from different cultures, so I prefer to go to restaurants of that place I have in mind. These are the main reasons that will make me to go to a restaurant.
After all it depends on your way of living when it comes to going to a restaurant or not. Many have different excuses for going to restaurants a lot. But if we limit the number of times of going to a restaurant to special occasions we will have a healthier life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
Deciding whether or not eating food in a restaurant or at home,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11290322581 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50437494409 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425806451613 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8286355705 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.75 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35 5.45110844103 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266586106471 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945876214363 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860540085169 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166005472878 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101013432522 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 10.9000537634 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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