Some people prefer to listen to music while they are studying or working. Others prefer to stay in a quiet place while they are studying or working. Which way do you prefer and why? Include reasons and details in your response.
Over past the few decades ,now some called into the question whether studying or working when are played some soft music is helpful or just we need have eyes on books with silent mood and so forth . IN the case of me , I assume it should be played music soaring my concentration and other underlying reasons that would be ilmlutereted throughout this essay .
To come straight to the point , there is a wide range of principal reason why leasing to music , in particular , those haves soft melody during studying or working can be full of prerogatives. First thing now loading in my head is that with this simple way we can increase our learning efficiency without shaking concentration. Take math which is a harsh and core lesson in the school as the most patently obvious example; when I used to need too cram before exam a music which was relaxing played , it brought about that I possess peace of mind .Motivating, moreover;is a other reason that stemming from this method ,especially , for the sake of those that are hyperactive . IN fact , a sufficient music and songs could be helpful to individuals turn their attend to do work very well or studying at heart .
ON the other hand , If I want to clarify more and more , I will need to mention that a good and related music how much can be importance for such aspects . Simply put ,hoever a soft melody possess a plenty of positive impact on folks’ minds ,some kind of music diatribe our minds like hard- rock .Thus, if we be concise about music style and which musical instruments are being played , i suppose without a no doubt it will give us a help for sofisticated-things .
To sum up , considering the point mentioned above , the most reacienal conclusion to be drive is that I have deeply-held belief although this method might has far-reaching handicaps on people and their duties ,privileges more and more are conspicuous .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, i suppose, in fact, in particular, kind of, no doubt, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75535168196 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7696141376 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605504587156 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.1344086022 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9143648646 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.777777778 100.406767564 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 20.6045352989 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2222222222 5.45110844103 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.5376344086 722% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121136634056 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053665271708 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252472347863 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071281406222 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386451581679 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 11.7677419355 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.0537634409 163% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.