Which of the following three activities do you prefer to do with a group of people rather than alone? 1. Eat a meal 2. Listen to music 3. Do homework
By and large, some has called into question whether we entail do our home work assignment in frame of a party or it is more and more precious to do somethings fun, like eat a meal or listen to a charming music with a group of same minded-ones. There has been no shortages of debates among scholars that individuals, in particular, some like me cannot meet their educational needs when do such activities with a company of folks. As for this writer’s opinion, I substantiate to the latter ideas. In what follows, I will delve into the most excellent reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
To begin with, I have had a lot to say about desirability of doing assignment with a bulk of ones in computation with other options that shed light on. First thing now looping up in my head is that when do something that related to education, it is of importance so as to being monitored by someone. What I am tying to say is that those who fail to be self-reliance or self motivated, and on the other hand, something easily shake their concentration ought to study in frame of a cluster of high motivated guys. Let clarified with personal experience, I cannot remember vividly but if my mind serves me right it was many yeas ago when I used to head to school. To cut along stay short had I not participated in a group which had held to give students a hand, I would not have passed exams very well.
Another thing ought to bear in mind is that always people entail motivation so as to show best of themselves. In fact, I asset if we joint to a party in other to do educational duties, not only will we face up with a positive completion, but also this rival beings about for us to do not feel that we are alone or wakeners in whatever places. Thus, this simple path would soar learning efficiency.
To sum up, considering the point mentioned above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that; I have deeply-held belief; albeit, it is importance to know we speak about what group of the society whether they are young or seiner citizens. So far as I am belong to young generation, we have to use our moments correctly and do activities with others that foster standards of lives, like studying with a group that could be gained well-round knowledge and so forth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...lated to education, it is of importance so as to being monitored by someone. What I am t...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...is that always people entail motivation so as to show best of themselves. In fact, I ass...
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Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...oung or seiner citizens. So far as I am belong to young generation, we have to use our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, well, another thing, as for, as to, in fact, in particular, by and large, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49878934625 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73745064002 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556900726392 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9960910552 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.714285714 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.6045352989 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 5.45110844103 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242026870071 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715418444122 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754217375399 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145348826522 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454467428349 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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