Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
“Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past”
By and large, as time went by, some people have called into question whether our current lifestyles have diminished standrads of lives and at last have deacreased happiness or not. Thre has been no shortages of debates among scholars that we witness more happiness and fulfillment among folks than many years ago. thus, I am in broad agreement with the idea. In what follows, I will delve into the most excellent reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
First thing now looping up in my head is that with the advent of the state-of-the-art technologies, namely the Internet, which become a way of life badly, ones have more tendency to hang on with them. In fact, these cutting-edge things being about individuals, in particular, Yonge generations, are seethed in turmoil. what i am trying to say is that not only do they spent a great deal of their time so as to do meaningless act, like surrefing in the online platform; hence, they cannot hit the town and do healthy activietis, which soar mental and physical well-being, but also they lose their change to aquire well-rounded knowledge form othes.
To sum up, considering the points above mentioned, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that; i have deeply-held belief, albeit, some privialges moden lifestyle has, happiness and fuilfilment going to decline sharply. that not only ones are course
Another thing ought to bear in mind is that gone are the days when ones used to are satisfild for their stuf, in fact, now they have wanted to posses more maternal possession and luxury lives. Simly put, our omder lifestyel wate our precouis lives more and more, thus, we could not ind a free time of our personl lives to hang on with lover-ones. Let clarified by personla experience, i fail to remeber vivdly, but if my mind serves me right, it was last month that made up my mind to go for job-seeking. To cut a long story short, in the light to that vocation had not adequate perks , like payed holidy , our felecsible time-work i did not acsept that, while i was a land of opportunilty for me to boraden my horazion, care to name.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, another thing, as to, in fact, in particular, by and large, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75068493151 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71247350065 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.968164258 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4166666667 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120680544779 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038845882925 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338237843952 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660530247454 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377137400232 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.