Do you think it is important for people to learn about local history?
Over the past few decades, some have called into question whether leaning local which related to the specific region can be valuable as well as precious or not. In my view, much as I am in agreement that other take in histories that based on other civilization and nations can be important, I feel folks need to spend a great deal of time broaden their horizon
in terms of their history and culture.
To being with, it goes without saying that people those have been learning their local history take full prerogatives from that. simply put this valuable thing bring about prohibition so as to make a mistake a lot, especially, those that have taken by mean of our forefathers, Iran, for instance, many years ago has faced with war, interior financial corruption, famine, as so forth;thus, we ential learn anything as much as possible for the sake of repetition ancients'mistakes ;otherwise, we can heighten quality of life and admittedly social livings' standards .
on the other hand, to come straight to the point, our interpersonal relationships as well as interaction with other nations based on our historical knowledge. Due to the fact, if locals acquired well-rounded knowledge in terms of their history , it would narrow their boundaries and foster the nation. let clarified more with a personal example, that If I gain a deeper insight into my civilization and cultural background, I will probably present my country in front of the other nations, in particular, cross-cultural societies due to the fact I want to make a nice view of my nation rather than bullied image.
to sum up, considering the mentioned above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that; I have deeply-held belief although learning history which is for other nations can play a vital role, it should not be ignored that local history would be more and more valuable.
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if, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, i feel, in particular, as well as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98717948718 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86107106094 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.8116895919 48.9658058833 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 194.5 100.406767564 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.6045352989 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 5.45110844103 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161666360346 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726180186472 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591227901894 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948767293789 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519549786635 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 11.7677419355 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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