Imagine that you plan to donate money to charity to help people in need. If you could give money to only one type of charitable organization, which one of the following would you choose and why? - An organization that provides food and housing to people in need - An organization that gives people money to start their own small business - An organization that provides medical care to people in need.
It goes without saying that in this decades a controversial topic which is about medical care and sanitation would play a vital role. It is kind of skeptical whether organizations where give others a had in terms of donation had better focus on medical services or other issues, namely, meals, accommodations, and so on. As far as I am concerned, the least perspective is of importance and takes priority over others points. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
To begin with, having the robust body and the overall well-being can easily form the backbone of the good community. Under the shadow of no doubt, in the modern today’s world, sad to say, a vast majority of the. Persons are suffering from a wide range of illnesses, which, in turn, would lead to hopeless to carry on living. IN fact, not only do quality of such persons’ lives are going to diminish, but also, like a virus that expand and become epidemic, other members of the society whether unprivileged or affluent could not go ahead and do their jobs. While by contrast, should people have physical health, they are more likely to stand on their on two feet and set up their own business and even run that very well, triggering to a plethora of merits, housing, for instance.
Secondly, allocating a vast sum of budget as a donation to establish new Jobs or providing accommodations cannot be far more wise and convincing. It is crystal clear that charitable organs have limited budgets for such acts. Let me shed light on my point, for constructing a home we entail labors, besides it ought to not be neglected that it long term plan and could be not easily provided a cosy and warm place for needy persons, is not it? Albeit, it is not the whole story, I reckon that we have to consider more and more financial approaches.
In sum, I utterly believe that medical services can help people struggling to make a living in the breadline rather than the other options.
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...readline rather than the other options.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, i reckon, in fact, kind of, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71097693062 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637142857143 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8212654349 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0939547984324 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274483616175 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219823333316 0.0737576698707 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537207919849 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00693840555473 0.0645574589148 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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