Do you agree or disagree: It is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you are younger rather than when you are older.
It goes without saying that in the sophisticated and complicated world where we live, younger generations can form the backbone of the dynamic and vigorous society. It is kind of skeptical whether when we are younger had better travel overseas and being tourist or the elderly take priority. As far as I am concerned, I assume Youngers that have more energy as well as time are more likely to have such tendencies. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first impression is related to one of the feathers of the young who have boundless energy and ups and Dows during this period of life. Under the shadow of no doubt, the travel can be golden opportunity of them so as to go here there everywhere to not only experience charming and wired things, which have been allocated for this age, but they would have this chance to establish new friendships as well. In fact, no one might refute that teenagers and adolescents do not need to make friends from across-cultural nations. Nevertheless, with the advent of state-of-the-art technologies, namely, technology-based devices they can easily find a new friend, real contacts play a vital role during that sensitive age. Simply put, they have to learn some lessons by themselves when they are alone, even in the different nation, otherwise, sooner or later they would have to face up to weak well-power and insufficient self-esteem, which bring about be rely on others.
Another equally noteworthy point, furthermore, corroborating my stance is that Youngers have far more free time off work, besides, they are having not big responsibility for their households, and so on. It is crystal clear that should ones have free time, they are more likely to without limitation go far-away and indulge in their moments. Let me shed light on my point from another aspect, my grandfather always has entailed to looks for my grandma who has a disease. To cut a long story short, had he just cared about his travels’ dream, she would have faced with death, in the light of children were not near them.
In sum, I have a deeply-held belief, albeit, all group of the sociality can exercise their right that is related to travels, Youngers not only have more chance, but also it is influential go that age.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ravel can be golden opportunity of them so as to go here there everywhere to not only ex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, as to, in fact, kind of, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86768447837 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.833019963 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0984744564 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.642857143 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0714285714 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0634357281566 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0247632410728 0.076458572812 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367589258007 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0423284915418 0.150856017488 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030479805666 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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