Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with the people who have a good sense of humor.
By and large, in the twenty-first century, some people have called into question whether we just entail making a friend among a company of gifted ones, those possess high intelligence or had better choose our friend among those are funny. There has been no shortages of debates among scholars that sense of humor individuals cannot meet a wide-range of humans’ needs. I utterly disagree with this idea. In what follows, I will delve into the most excellent reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
To begin with, it goes without saying that all folks across the globe possess equal precious and in terms of this question it sill reliance upon what type of the society we speak about. First thing now looping up in my head is that one of the features of human being is that indulging their moments with happiness. In fact, our mood is influenced by surrounded-ones, like friends as lover ones; thereby, have an easy-going tendency even during hard times, make fun is importance. Let clarified with personal experience, I fail to remember vividly but if my mind serves me right it was many years ago when I used to head to school and one of those days I faced up to a dilemma, which was in terms of break-home. To cut a long story short, it was my funny bosom gave me a hand to do not seethe in the turmoil on the rock; while a straight student failed to help me.
Another thing ought to bear in mind is that whether in the developed nations or unprivileged areas under any circumstance all ones need to sustain happiness. What I am trying to say is that statistical researches have reveal that life expectancy due to difficulties of lives diminished sharply. I reckon that not only can we create a pleasant moment with those who have a sense of humor, but also it indirectly has profound impacts on the standard of living. For instance, had olders, being in terminal lives, had adequate friends, they would have released their stress and fatigue so as to quality of their lives are being soared.
To sum up, considering the point mentioned above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that; I have deeply-held belief albeit sometimes we need deal with our problems with help of our smart friends, the role of sense of humor ones are far more vital as the whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, another thing, as to, for instance, i reckon, in fact, by and large, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6592039801 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61296947267 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614427860697 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8421497328 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.785714286 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246074704692 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750772751867 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661486466187 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142983316255 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361944844628 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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