Do you agree or disagree?
It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with the people who have a good sense of humor.
Making friends is important since everyone needs someone to talk while they are depressed, to travel together on holidays, to ask for some advice when they encounter difficulties. In my opinion, among those various kinds of people in the world, it is the most worthy thing to make a friend with intelligent people. There are two reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, intelligent people are not only smart but thoughtful, and they are helpful not only for some professional areas but for daily chores. They can find an effective solution while their friends in trouble. My personal experience can be a compelling illustration. Once my wallet was stolen while I was traveling on an island in the Philippine. Afterward, my friend stopped me when I was going back to search it, he guided me to the currency exchange center, instead. Surprisingly, I saw my wallet in a man’s hand, and my friend, meanwhile, told the stuff and security that the man holding my wallet is a thief. Finally, thanks to him, I got my money back. Thus, a bright friend can help people fix problems at an important moment.
Moreover, clever people are easy to talk to because they are logical, and they can make complicated things easier as well. Further, they always know how to analyze sophisticated problems and explain them in a simple way. Take my experience, for instance. I had a struggled time when I was hesitating about which flat to rent for my new job so I asked a friend of mine, who is always rational and logical. He analyzed my decision first and then told me the merits and drawbacks of each option. He shared his opinions with me and gave me his advice. Besides this, everything he said is clear and organizational. In the end, he helped me to find out some points that I had not noticed before. Therefore, an intelligent friend is helpful, and also they can always provide some constructive suggestions.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that building a friendship with intelligent people can benefit our daily life also help people improve ourselves. This is because intelligent people can always use different ways to show their wisdom. Additionally, a smart person can always give some useful and practical suggestions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ience can be a compelling illustration. Once my wallet was stolen while I was travel...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...they can make complicated things easier as well. Further, they always know how to ...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...sophisticated problems and explain them in a simple way. Take my experience, for instance. I ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86375321337 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80659287056 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560411311054 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6867112289 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2608695652 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9130434783 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16543488404 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483577199557 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637738798317 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123231924337 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411258054041 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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