Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Human activity is making the earth a worse place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of technology, people have taken lots of advantages of the earth. Personally, I believe that human activities have already caused huge damage to the earth. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, after the industrial revolution, more factories were built, and more harmful substances were produced. The environment is becoming worse because of industrialization. Consider soil acidification, for instance. The carbon oxide from factories is the main reason for causing acid rain. Additionally, acid rain makes soil become acid, and acid soil is not conducive to agriculture. As a result, the types of crops that can be cultivated in those areas are restricted. The farmer cannot provide as much food as they could, and it may lead to a food shortage. Therefore, I think that the condition of the earth today is not as ideal as we have in the past.
Moreover, although people advocate doing recycle these days, this way is to treat the symptom but not root the cause. In addition, people do not actually do garbage disposal well. The garbage made by seven billion people is not only harmful to the ocean, marine creatures but also humans. For example, people use lots of plastic products, and plastic is the material, which is hardest to decompose. People usually put this kind of trash underground where nearby the coast. Most of them would flow into the ocean. Some fish ate the plastic particle since it is difficult to be broken down. By the food chain, humans would eat those plastics which are harmful to human body, and the plastics may stay in their body. If people had concerned about the issue of the environment more, the earth would not have been destroyed so quickly. Thus, I think that the food we eat nowadays is not as clean or healthy as it used to be.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that people overuse the resources on the earth, so the situation of this planet becomes worse. This is because of the chemical substances that are emitted from the industrial factories, and negligence on sustainable use of resources.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69352089767 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556786703601 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9732303661 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8260869565 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6956521739 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21739130435 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115265599587 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307149187846 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301380967796 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716227973411 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034269601941 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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