Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The future belongs to young people, and they have the right to decide the government, the policies, and society. In my opinion, young people have a great influence on the important decisions related to their future. There are two reasons why I feel this way, which I will explore in the following essay.

First and foremost, people are used to receiving information online these days, and they are easily affected by those messages. Besides this, social media is popular, and most of the users are young people, who can influence the public by sharing their opinions on the internet. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. Before the election in my country this year, many young people used social media to express their ideas, especially using Youtube. Even some YouTubers who are under 20 years old announced their political standpoint, it actually impacted a lot of people and decided the future of the election indirectly. Consequently, young people can decide on+ important national affairs.

Moreover, although some people think young people are still not mature enough and do not care about the laws and the policies, they are more active in+ devoting themselves to some social issues. They are positive and believe that they can change the world. Consider legalizing gay marriage in my country, for instance. There are plenty of people who ask strangers on the street to sign the documents to require the government legislate to make homosexuals can get married, admitting their relationships are legal. In the end, the government did make a law about homosexual marriage and declared that people are allowed to get married+ no matter which gender or identity. In short, no one can deny that young people are capable of+ influencing the government and shape society.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that young people care about their future than anyone else, so they will do their best to shape the world. This is because there are so many young celebrities using social media and influence others every day. Additionally, they have a+ stronger motivation to tell the public their ideas.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, consequently, first, moreover, so, still, even so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04664723032 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55664685647 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2929910652 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1666666667 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19428174983 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672316606339 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499139984927 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139727677463 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466243339111 0.0645574589148 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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