Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with the people who have a good sense of humor.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friends have a significant impact on our lives. It is often asked which is more important factor for making friends, intelligence or sense of humor? Personally, I prefer to make friendship with intelligent people rather than people who have a good sense of humor. I feel this way because of two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, intelligent people are more reliable and always make good decisions in difficult situations. We go through many hardships in our lives and it is ensuring when we know there is somebody who can help us in the most effective way. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. One year ago, I had a serious problem in my job and was not able to control the situation. When I explained the issue for my friend, who is one of the most intelligent people I know, he immediately came with a great solution which helped me to overcome my problem.
Secondly, smart people often have notable information in many fields which I can learn from them. They are usually successful in their career, personal life, business, and I can use their knowledge and experience in my life. For example, in the recent years, there is an economic crisis in my country, inflation is increasing and saving money and deal with the situation is a huge problem. I did not know any way to preserve my property, but one of my friends, who is a successful businessman, gave me some advice that using them, I could save myself from inflation impacts. In fact, I saved my life by his advice.
In conclusion, in my opinion, although, a good sense of humor is lovely, intelligence is a more important matter to consider when I want to make friends because of reliability and learning benefits that intelligent people can offer me as a friend.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6974522293 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79855136309 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557324840764 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1263542299 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272683945625 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980630288377 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120516601446 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19258221283 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947352523677 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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