are you agree or disagree with this statement successful people try new things and take a risks rather than doing what they really know about that and how to do well
Over past few decades, some have called into question whether those who spend a head-deal of their time just on the specific task and vocation could be success or others that have tendency do anything a much as possible and acquired a plenty of precious experiences that lead to fulfillment and sauciness .In my view, I assume ones who take a risks so as to do anything even those need a well-rounded knowledge would trigger more and more positive achievements rather than other statement due to a wide range of underlying reasons ,which I would illustrate thourghout the essay .
To come straight to the point , it is conspicuous that per task and skill has a different experience that should be take if we want to broaden our horizon, however always can be hard start new windows .Simply put ,although ones who just stick on a same lifestyle probably during he or she lifelong would not face difficult sicumesctence , other kind of ones are more likely to foster their quality of life .For instance, If someone has had a tendency toward job-hopping , he or she will have the chance to seek her or his favorite vocation, in fact, it is golden opportunity for young generations to examine themselves.however, my favorable group of the people in terms of this issue might gain a deeper insight to their surround to as to decided which kind of duty as an example would be suit ;thereby, more and more opportunities arise for them to not only indulging their moments and have fine, but they take privileges such as; high earn, paid holiday, and so forth.
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Other factor sold be worth mention is that trying new and even buzzer things can be good therapy for the sake of hose suffer from depression that I assert they are seethed in monotones life as well as humdrum works.Thus ,this willingness not only would give a others hand so as to bring about positive mood for them but also it possesses profound impact on their personal lives.
To sum up, considering the points mentioned above, the most rational conclusion to drown that; I have deeply-held belief that although one who just want to do something that is sophisticated and doing at heart might possess some prerogative, other tendency brings about far more achievement and success, which should not be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, as to, for instance, in fact, kind of, such as, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82908163265 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76168317144 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617346938776 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 98.0 20.1344086022 487% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 249.010416449 48.9658058833 509% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 473.25 100.406767564 471% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 98.0 20.6045352989 476% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.25 5.45110844103 555% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152926497963 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954810989262 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298284403365 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095715932816 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298750870329 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.3 11.7677419355 427% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.53 58.1214874552 -34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.3 10.1575268817 397% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.92 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.24 8.01818996416 153% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 10.002688172 530% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 41.2 10.0537634409 410% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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