Since always, one of the main choices about what we have to do is decide where to live. Some people prefer to live in small towns, others prefer big cities. I believe both have advantageous and disadvantageous, but according to me, live in big cities is better because a couple of reasons, mainly economic questions and better conditions regarding education, accessibility, and leisure, however, I will explore better in the following essay.
First of all, big cities are usually more economically developed. In the big cities, the people can find jobs easier than in small towns. For example, I was looking for a job for almost a year in a small town but I did not get any, however, when I moved to a big city I get a job faster. It is so good to live in a big city because we can find all things that we want easier than small towns, due to the fact the better economic development, like for instance, we have many banks, markets, shopping and all kind of trade which we desire.
Secondly, there is no doubt that education in big cities is better than in small towns. Usually, the better universities and schools are been located in big cities. In today’s modern world, more and more competitive, the pursuit of knowledge has made that people in small towns move to big cities.
Thirdly, in big cities we find more options to go out with friends, to have fun. In some way, we have more options to rest and leisure. Therefore, this implies a better quality of life and more and more healthy social life mainly with friends.
To put it in a nutshell, live in small towns have some advantageous, like for instance, in most cases they are more secure and quiet. For people who like tranquility and secure, small towns are the best choice. However, for those people who prefer better economic conditions, better places to go and a variety of things to do, the better choice is a big city.
Considering the fact that…
Considering the fact that life is too short and human have certain right to move and sea all around the world, moving from one place to another would give them the great amounts of opportunities, without which, life no longer left and the well-time to gain monumental job opportunity and well friends connection would not be imagining. In my personal view, sedentary life style is emerging as a compelling evidence of choosing wrong way to live. I feel this way for two reasones which I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, It goes without saying that by living in different cities by discret location which have monumental cultural background would have been make life more satisfied and practical. In other words, world presented lots of advantures which is circulated in all around the world that every persone would be better to experienc. moreover, in that condicive condition people can seiz the opportunities in order to make a great friends connection from all over the world. One of my own experiences is a good case in point. my friend and I were living in one small city for a long time which was clearly dulling that makes me to think about immigrating to other country. since I had migerated and left my own city I coud know many new people which were comming from all around the world. The decision that I had made culminated in building the new environmnet with new friends and exciting advantures that hapend in the follow. It would never happen if I had never left my own city after a long years of sedentary lifestyle.
Additional reasones that convince me to agree with moving around instead of sitting in one city is to making and developing the job opportunities. In fact, there are bounch of job facilities with learning new skils that every person could gain by their researching and goining into the different place. My friends example is a compeling evidenc that shows this idea. He is migrating for long time from Europe to us and mane countries which gave rise to develop his job and accuire great skills in his life.
In conclusion , I firmly agree that people should seize their opportunities in order to make the most of time in their life by experiencing differents places to live instead of settel in one place. It is not only gave them well-time to make new friends connection but also gave them job opportunities result in obtaining new skills.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, kind of, no doubt, first of all, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60294117647 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56340192162 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479411764706 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1165625541 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8125 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230737039758 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094995602443 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120306280525 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142317382357 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900570622697 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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