Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city.
Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to
support your answer.
As the individual character differs, people's choice of living area differs as well. Personally I would like live in big city as big city will be inundated with choices in any of field of interest.
First, to lead a good life, anyone should have a good source of income. Like most of the people, my source of income is from a job. Hence, a big city provides me with more job opportunities than a small town. As opportunities increases, a good path for building a stable career can be found. With increase in demand, the compensation provided for a job increases as well. So, living in a big city is helpful in building a career as well as getting a good source of income.
Secondly, we need good hospitals when we fall sick. However, most of the sophisticated hospital facilities are present in big cities rather than a small town. In case of an emergency, it would be helpful if we have a well-equipped hospital nearby. So, by staying in city we can easily get to hospitals in time as compared to living in in small town. Hence, living in city would be a wise option as compared to living in small town.
Thirdly, big cities will have different forms of entertaining people. It will be easy wore-off the boredom in a big city rather than a small town. A big city will have a wide range of options like a movie hall, a fancy restaurant or a gaming arena whereas in small town there will only be limited options to enjoy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...hospitals in time as compared to living in in small town. Hence, living in city would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 262.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48854961832 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62060357152 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480916030534 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9686559866 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171223264303 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699512094062 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713962907715 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120366612373 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527258626339 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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