“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do
with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific
reasons and examples to explain your position.
Success always comes from hard work. Success of a person doesn't depend on luck. If success would have been dependent on luck, we would not have seen many hard working people reach the top.
To achieve any of our dreams, we should have perseverance and we should be willing to work hard. Let us take the example of Thomas Alva Edison. He was one of renowned scientists in the world. Edison is well-know for invention of Electric bulb, an alternate source of light other than natural source sun. Electric bulb is a very important invention in the history of mankind. It was not till failing for more than 1000 times, did Edison found a solution for making an electric bulb work. In his case, it can be clearly seen that luck had no factor influencing his success. The only thing that led to his success was his hard work and perseverance.
Let us look at another example of Paralympics. It is just like Olympics but the athletes are differently abled. In this case, the athletes who are differently abled work hard and try to outshine other participants in competition. In such scenarios, there is no way how luck determines success of a particular participant. All the athletes gain eligibility only based on their hard work. Though a candidate may be selected to participate in a competition, his success depends only on amount of hard work done.
Another common example that we can consider is the corporate culture in contemporary world. In today's corporate world, any employee reaches a higher position based on his alacrity towards his work. When a employee works arduously, he or she automatically gains attention from higher management and gets promoted. Without working hard and by depending only on luck, no employee will ever reach a higher position in a company.
Conclusively it can said that hard work is the key for success. People depending on hard work rather than luck are the one who succeed in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...mes from hard work. Success of a person doesnt depend on luck. If success would have b...
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Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had been'?
Suggestion: had been
...erson doesnt depend on luck. If success would have been dependent on luck, we would not have se...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... on his alacrity towards his work. When a employee works arduously, he or she aut...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
... in a company. Conclusively it can said that hard work is the key for success. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85498489426 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68954469388 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531722054381 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8796941652 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8695652174 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3913043478 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21739130435 5.45110844103 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184933231683 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061769938605 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465236492857 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130219325967 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493750396308 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.