Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Everybody has their own preferences and I have my own too. Mostly I prefer to spend my time alone because I am kind of a introvert person. This might also be because I have certain hobbies that either do not sound good within a group or with my friends or I do not feel convenient practicing those whilst I am with my friends. As far as I am concerned, spending time with friends is only recommend when you really need a company or want to spend time with them. Being social for no reason does not make any sense because you would only do that either when you do not have certain task or thing to do or you are not motivated to do anything at all. On the contrary, spending time with friends or family can actually be very beneficial in case when you are feeling tired and undetermined. Spending time with people can make you feel relieved and less tired. However, as I always plan my day to have it very productive at the end of the day, I hardly gather any time to spend with my family and friends. To be honest, I have kind of got accustomed to what I daily plan to do and hence do not like to spend much time with my friends or family. But I do spend at most an hour daily with my family though.

In short, being social most of the time should not make any sense unless you love to be and have essentially no ambitions related to socialism. It does not mean that we should not approach people when we are in need.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, really, so, in short, kind of, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 276.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14855072464 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28577822275 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471014492754 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 618.680645161 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7276812591 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4166666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421987733979 0.236089414692 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181316776841 0.076458572812 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901122409868 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277020444208 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145767570953 0.0645574589148 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.09 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 86.8835125448 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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