Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.
How the people spend their time directly influence on their lifestyle and future. There are different views among people in how spend their time. Someone prefer to be alone and others maybe prefer to spent time with their friends as much as possible. In my opinion, i often like to spend most of my time with my real friends. I think spending time with other people especially who are my best friend have a lot of advantages.
First, i am sociable and open person. If i am alone for just one days, i will annoyingly feel lonely. I like to communicate with other person wherever i am. For example when i go to the bakery and i’m waiting to my turn, i usually try to interact with other people around me. In addition, i notice that when I spend a time with my friend, I am more happy and content. I realize that even when i decide to go to theater or gym, I always must arrange with one of my friends to go with him and it’s really bothersome for me to go to places like that alone.
Second, being with my close friend give us a good opportunity to discuss with each other about any things. This discussion usually help us to improve our knowledge. We often talk about sports, politics, and new technologies. This conversation extend my information over these topics and it provides me a good way to socialize with other persons. Furthermore, i can observe different aspect of viewpoint and analyzing of one topic and use them to improve my ability of thinking on new topics. This capability has helped me to propose more convincing presentation that is accepted with most of the people who have different viewpoints. Therefore, i think that i’m now more prosperous in comparison with if i spent most of my time alone.
In conclusion, being with my close friends in most of my time provides a lot of benefits for me. I am a very outgoing person and being with friends give me a chance to feel happy. Spending time with my friends provides me a valuable opportunity to gain extensive information on diverse topics through discussion. Thus, I absolutely prefer spend my time with my friends instead of being alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'prefers'.
Suggestion: prefers
...people in how spend their time. Someone prefer to be alone and others maybe prefer to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...iend have a lot of advantages. First, i am sociable and open person. If i am al...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...irst, i am sociable and open person. If i am alone for just one days, i will anno...
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Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one day', 'a day', or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: one day; a day; days
...and open person. If i am alone for just one days, i will annoyingly feel lonely. I like ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...erson. If i am alone for just one days, i will annoyingly feel lonely. I like to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... communicate with other person wherever i am. For example when i go to the bakery...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... person wherever i am. For example when i go to the bakery and i'm waiting t...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...th other people around me. In addition, i notice that when I spend a time with my...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y and content. I realize that even when i decide to go to theater or gym, I alway...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ialize with other persons. Furthermore, i can observe different aspect of viewpoi...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o have different viewpoints. Therefore, i think that i'm now more prosperous...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...w more prosperous in comparison with if i spent most of my time alone. In concl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59317585302 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65479563689 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472440944882 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4474643278 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5454545455 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3181818182 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41486275863 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150594107843 0.076458572812 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109429144435 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301918840718 0.150856017488 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127704323433 0.0645574589148 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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