No one can deny that there are always extrovert and introvert out there in the world. if I were forced to choose one among above, I would definitely choose to spend my time in isolation. It is my firm belief that staying indifferent to people has copious of advantages over being more sociable for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, an introvert person gets time to ponder over his career and can make pragmatic plan for the future, so that he can get good job. After thinking about the life he will be able to act according to his wishes. For instance, drawing from my own experience, I love to stay in solitude and analyze pros and cons of the action that I am going to act next day. As a result, I can act very well in the working space. Moreover, this kind of activity has always been helping me to uplift my performance. This example demonstrates how staying alone helps to strengthen to bring good result.
Secondly, a lover of isolation always gets opportunity to learn so many things and can become an erudite personality. Staying in a serene environment all alone help any one to learn different kind literary works, from which he can be well-education. For instance, a well-known poet named Laxmi Prasad Devkota used to go in retreat for half of the year every year. At that time, he used to study books of different genera. As a result, he used to come up with his own poetry; most of his literary work were admired by the people. This would not have been possible if he had not gone into isolation.
At last, there are some profession, for which people need to spend their time in a society with friends. In this case, one would get benefited from being gregarious. For instance, we can take a example of businessman, who has to sell his goods. Without being touch with people, friends and society, he can not sell his goods. But, this is only the rare case.
In light of these above mentioned reason, I would prefer to spend my time alone but not always. When it comes the time to sell goods, it is always better to spend time with friends to get advantage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48835420316 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535897435897 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8319756678 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7727272727 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212250564976 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639564380678 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868241356792 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149977758846 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117333101902 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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