I like traveling, it provides me a chance to get away from my busy life. However, people have different views on the places they want to go, as far as I am concerned,I am prone to travel to spots with a lot of people. And I am going to elaborate the reasons behind this choice in the following paragraph.
First of all, going to crowded tourist spots make it possible for us to meet people who have totally backgrounds. To be specific,You get the chance to know people who are from different parts of country or even other parts of the globe when you go to some of the world-famous places, such as, the Beijing Forbidden City, etc. I am a quite outgoing person, I really enjoy talking to different people, which is delightful and enable me to gain different perspectives on many things. Talking with foreigners also give us a chance to gain more exposure to foreign culture, as a result, we can become more tolerant and respectful to each other ,which is crucial in today’s highly connected world.
Although, there are may be one or more advantages to traveling to less crowded places, for example, some people like it because they really appreciate the quietness during their traveling. However, I am not a person who get the beauty of quiteness, when I travel to somewhere by myself and there are only few people, all I feel is a sense of loneliness.
Last but not the least,,traveling with a lot of people is more convenient when you sign up for a group tour . With a lot of stuffs ,such as , the air ticket, the passport and the hotel booking ,get taken care of by others ,our trip can be much easier. Last year, I signed up for a packet tour heading to America,It was a great experience , I became friends with some of my companions ,we took care of each other and exchanged ideas on these amazing places.
In short, I really appreciate traveling to crowded places with other people, because it not only provides us an opportunity to make new friends but also make our trip more convenient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, really, so, for example, i feel, in short, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56198347107 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67209762291 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528925619835 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.6999199131 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.384615385 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9230769231 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199065658585 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704064117616 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484148294293 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108240075997 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332339486528 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.