Some people like to relax when they go on vacation while others like to go sightseeing and do
activities. Which do you prefer and why?
Throughout the centuries people have invented great diversity of methods to spend their holidays. Someone prefers to be engaged in activities, while others argue for having their vacation in peace and quiet. If I were to choose, I would definitely opt for the latter view, because nothing could be better. Primarily the vacation is about lowering stress levels, coping with health problems, and not about performing activities you do not enjoy. I would be better of visiting restaurants and appreciating different foreign cuisines, or lying on the beach, tanning under hot sunbeams. Unlike sightseeing with large guided groups in exhausting tours, the main idea of which is usually to force tourists to purchase as many trinkets as they can, I do consider such vacation appealing. Several popular YouTube bloggers share my point of view, providing their audience with informative videos about historical roots or cultural features of countries people usually attend on vacation. I can learn from this content while performing already mentioned activities. Observing the advancement of the internet and other computer networks, we can distinctly notice the emergence of information that was previously unavailable online on websites. Utilizing the World Wide Web humanity can learn unknown facts about foreign countries and popular sights not leaving their workplace; however, the cannot feel the hot sun of California from rainy London, or imagine swimming in the warm waters of the Mediterranean sea while attending their local swimming pool. As well as extreme sports, a vacation should be used for getting real emotions, such that you are unable to perceive from the screen of your computer. People who enjoy sightseeing and active tours may object to me, considering motionless vacations as degrading or useless. In some aspects, I agree with people who hold such opinion. Brain activity, which is an essential part of human beings, is the inevitable process for people, and lying on the beach sometimes could be disadvantageous or even harmful. Many scientists argue that the fluctation of brain activity is not beneficial for humans, and keeping such activity at the same level is the important duty of everyone. To conclude, there is a great variety of ways to spend a vacation, and every choice strongly depends on the nature of a person. Some people are seeking for "brainstorm", others prefer physical relaxation. I suppose that inactive vacations are more beneficial than the active ones because you get the experience you cannot perceive from home, which makes the vacation unique.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, while, i suppose, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33576642336 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87182141376 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7528756002 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206094676906 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603947786035 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516126682938 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206094676906 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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