You are going to have a new roommate next semester. Which of the following qualities is most important to you: a) cleanliness b) humorous c) politeness?
Everybody has had situations when he or she had to share a room with unfamiliar person at a university. In this case it is crucial to choose a roommate with ideas and behavior which resemble yours. Someone prefers people who care about room conditions, while others suppose that funny roommate would benefit them the most. In my opinion, a perfect person should include all these qualities to live in one room with me.
At first, it is awful to exist in dirty room because both mental and physical implications are dangerous. I am allergic to dust, so living in a room with nasty dust layers would cause serious health problems. Moreover, intelligent people say that if you have the order in a room, you have the order in the head. It is not a secret that working in cleansed placement significantly boosts creativity and critical thinking. For instance, I always care about the cleanliness in my room which helps me to think out of frameworks and benefits my productivity.
However, sharing a room with a person who is not able to support or make you laugh resembles living with a robot. Humorous roommates are usually very sociable and outgoing personalities who always eager to help you. One day I failed my exam and returned to the dormitory very upset; however, my close friend and roommate offered to order a pizza and watch funny TV series. We had laughed all night long and next day I almost forgot about the despair I had the day before.
Finally, I do not even consider students as roommates if they are impolite. I think that is absolutely impossible to live with a person who can offend or even beat you for no reason. I start to remember my primary school, where some kids were unable to control their speech and actions which resulted in numerous conflicts. Nobody wants to live with a bully because people use their rooms to relax and not be on the alert.
In a nutshell, to be an appropriate roommate, a person should include all such qualities as politeness, cleanliness, and humorous. I strongly believe that if a roommate lacks even one of this traits, he or she would not get along with me.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66042780749 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62791244493 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55614973262 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.4159391399 48.9658058833 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.7368421053 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156403681853 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482303687213 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527280541283 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843694163434 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279017751471 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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