There is no shortage of debate about advantages and disadvantages of internet. In my openion advantages of internet outweigh disadvantages. I feel this way for several reasons which I explore in following essay.
First, internet contain abundant information which is very useful for students. If a student is having hard time understandng classroom lecture then he can visit several websites that explain the same topic with simple realistic explantions. One can also watch videos in Youtube to understand the concept. My personal experience is compelling example for this. During my enginering I missed several Operating System classes and I had hardtime understanding its concepts. However, I found few Youtube channels that explined operating concepts with simple real world examples. As a result I didn't only understand the concept very well but I got good marks in exam as well. Without internet I had to go through textbook all by myself. Usage of internet helped me to save time and understand the topic well.
Second, one can enhance his skills at free of cost by using internet. If an individual wants to learn a new hobby such as cooking, singing, dancing or playing guitar etc he can make use of thousands of videos available online without paying extra money. Students can also take courses from courses from universities around the globe through distant learning. Certificates from these corses will be helpful for students to apply for other universities or jobs.
Third, internet has made our life much comfortable than ever before. If someone is lazy to cook food at home, he can not only order food online but he can also order it from the best restoraunt around him by going through restorunt review available online. If someone is lost in a new city and cannot find way back to his hotel room then he can just relay on google maps using internet. On can also send money to other person's account with just few clicks in his mobile phone. There are many more applications of internet that has made our jobs easier than we ever imagined.
In summary, advantages of information available in internet outweigh it's disadvantages.This is because we can benifit from internet in all the things that we do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, then, third, well, i feel, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00808625337 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76215494333 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592991913747 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4295060889 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4545454545 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8636363636 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117117249389 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372107837181 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304235057694 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685785665902 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159672672272 0.0645574589148 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.