Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies Which opinion do you agree with Use specific reasons and details to support your

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...ing the whole day for academic subjects.If I was forced to choose, I would definit...
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...d not be treated as an optional subject.A student goes to school not only to be e...
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...cs but also for his overall development.For this, it is essential that schools shou...
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...invest their time for physical exercise.Playing different games helps us to have a salu...
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...ous lifestyle as it helps us remain fit.My personal opinion on this matter has bee...
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...foundly influenced by my own experience.Being an obese child during my high school, I...
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...ld during my high school, I got bullied everyday.To get my body in proper shape, I joine...
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...shape, I joined my school football club.I trained their daily and that training h...
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... school football team at national level.If, I had not joined the football club the...
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...ondly, sports helps us make new friends.It improves our team-work and enhances our...
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...work and enhances our analytical skills.It reduces stress in our life and improves...
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...our life and improves our mental health.Sometimes it may also lead to a good job promotio...
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...t may also lead to a good job promotion.For instance, one of my friend had a knack ...
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...nd made his company won the tournament. He was hailed by everyone when he returned...
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...e included in routine school day program..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, as for, for instance, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92771084337 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98595930456 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599397590361 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.1344086022 328% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 275.886498401 48.9658058833 563% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 327.2 100.406767564 326% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.4 20.6045352989 322% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.6 5.45110844103 305% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165470427563 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100780679546 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886377855698 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125975849432 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815281445905 0.0645574589148 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.0 11.7677419355 297% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.95 58.1214874552 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 10.1575268817 275% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.01818996416 133% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.0537634409 282% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

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