Concern about financial circumstances is always there, and the recent economic crisis due to the supply shock has made it more pronounced. Some people assert that our lifestyle should be more frugal during this crisis, while others do not agree. From my perspective, it is more sagacious for us to spend money once we get paid although we can benefit from saving money.
Admittedly, saving money will bring us the following benefits. First of all, accumulating money can enhance our ability to resist potential risk in the future. For instance, if we get some intractable diseases, like cancer, we have to pay a large amount of money to save our life. At the moment, our savings play an important role to provide such money in a short period of time. Second, saving money can help us to develop the habit of frugality. Third, saving money can make us have enough money to donate to charity, making our society better off.
In fact, saving money will probably worsen our life quality, because of the following reasons. First and foremost, we will lose a lot of precious opportunities to experience beautiful moments that should have been ours. This is because, for example, we will refuse friends’ invitation to travel together. We only order some cheap but undesirable items and cancel some sumptuous anniversaries in order to curtail our spending for saving money. Although we always anticipate that we would use money in the future to get enough compensation for today’s pity, the truth is that time cannot be bought by money. A lot of things, like accompanying our parents, are what we should do right now. Therefore, carpe diem, literally referring to seizing the day, should be a part of our lifestyle.
In addition, in today’s post-pandemic era, countries all over the world are affected by hyperinflation. This means that the value of money deposited in our savings account will continue to depreciate. This indicates that we should spend our money before our saving is being eroded by inflation. Besides inflation, wars are another relentless killer of our savings. Take the confrontation between Russia and Ukraine as an example. Houses and cars worth billions of dollars will become a ground of debris after being attacked by a missile. What’s worse, the currency of Ukraine has turned into nothing but junk after Ukraine was invaded by Russia. This is because all the value of fiat currency is tied with our governments. This means that our savings will teeter on the brink of becoming garbage, once the position of our governments is threatened.
In conclusion, both of two views have their pros and cons, but still, I maintain that it is preferable to spend out our money, as its beneficial effects outweigh the rest.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, third, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96304347826 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68151535044 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560869565217 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.672562405 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8076923077 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57692307692 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227786941703 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657460406796 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603853169591 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141383354117 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510083275496 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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