Some people like to spend their money as soon as they earn it, while others think it is better to save their money for some time in the future. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Money concerns are a major cause of stress and anxiety in the modern world. Some people prefer to spend their money as soon as they earn. However, I go along with people who believe that we should save our money for not-too-distant needs. Because, we may face crucial points in our life that by spending the expenses it will bring us more prosperous life and also for emergency situations.
Many youngsters believe that enjoyment is the most important purpose in our life and as soon as we achieve this we will experience better life. Indeed, they are not ready to ignore small and highly ephemeral happiness in favor of greater and long lasting triumph. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was teenager, I had a part time job with a paltry wage. Because the money was not significant, I always spend all of them rightly after I was paid. I ate out with my friends, bought new unnecessary stuff, and paid for video games. On the other hand, my younger brother was a teenager like me and he worked with a small amount of wage, too. He saved all the money he earned and just after completing his high school, he started university due to he could pay a remarkable part of tuition fee by his own savings. But, I had to work for two years until I could afford the university expenses. As a result, if I had not spend my whole money, I would have continued my education immediately.
Furthermore, the life is full of unexpected emergencies that can cause a lot of inconvenience and anxiety if we do not have enough saving. One of the most problematic issues in our life is medical bills especially when we face an unforeseen happening. To overcome these tough situations, we need to have saving to cover the unwanted expenses. For instance, one of my friends had a car crash recently and unfortunately he broke his leg. Although, he would work and his salary was reasonable, he could not save money because of the payment of the loan he borrowed to buy his car. Finally, he had to ask his elderly parents to cover not only the medical expenses but his living costs, as well. Therefore, it is really wise to save some money for unexpected situations.
In conclusion, I argue in favor of the opinion that we should not spend our money as soon as we earn. Because, we could use it for our superior purposes and for unpredictable expenses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e of this. When I was teenager, I had a part time job with a paltry wage. Because the mon...
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Line 3, column 939, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ity expenses. As a result, if I had not spend my whole money, I would have continued ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55764705882 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66475133061 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3711135269 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2173913043 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4782608696 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04347826087 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215939045309 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738488823038 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107173017715 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153134376166 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687803505343 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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