Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
The greatest kindness in the world is to help others, those who really need it. It's an act that is always appreciated by everyone. Since childhood, I have heard one line numerous times, God has given at least one quality to everyone to survive. however, some people earn their living by depending on others. I don't feel right every time by giving money to beggars we are helping them. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, begging makes a person dependent. I am not saying we should stop helping but instead we should encourage them to do some work so that they can become independent and support themself. I have seen many beggars who are physically fit and don't do anything for living. these people even get marry and make their children beg money too. so, for many poor people, it's a business to beg money. Ultimately they always remain in the same scenario. For example, in India, I have seen lots of poor children who beg money, not by their own wish but forced to do this. even there are a group of people who run this type of workshop to make money. they are so dangerous that they kidnap children exploit them, even torture them by making them physically handicap, so that more money can be collected. there have been several scandals were in the news and dozens of people been, arrested for assaulting children. therefore, we never no are we actually helping them or we are encouraging them by giving them money.
Secondly, the overall economy of the country suffers because of these beggars who are unemployed, uneducated people who do not contribute to the growth of the country. The government has initiated lots of programs for citizens like free education and food for those who cannot afford education for their children. however, it's very difficult to make them understand that education can change their life and give a bright future for their children. Mostly, these people believe if their child will not beg for money then how they will survive. therefore they do not want to send their children to school. I have seen a couple of examples like this when I was in India. therefore, it's our duty to contribute toward this change.
In conclusion, I would like to say that help towards a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, at least, for example, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68734491315 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42236499129 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531017369727 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4155671986 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.56 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.12 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182688288621 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547696685305 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461125622635 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977948853021 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594911492729 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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