Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while other thinks that it is essential for the human kind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Over the past few years, space exploration has been one of the most discussed topics in today's society. While some people suggested that studying space is crucial for humanity, others argued that it is somewhat a waste of resources. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument, while strongly opine with the advantages.
Despite the current trend of investing in scientific research to explore space, some people oppose the idea and believe that the government should rather deal with the ongoing problems on Earth before going to outer space. This is because the survival of humanity should be the priority and the enormous spendings on space exploration have achieved such little except for a slight advancement in technology that can instead be used to improve the living conditions of the human population. Not to mention the excessive consumption of resources and energy that can be utilized for other means. To exemplify, according to the New York Times, the expenses of the NASA moon landing that cost over $1 billion dollars can be used to put Americans out of poverty.
On the other hand, space research is considered to be an essential finding to address the fundamental questions about the planet existence and universe. By investigating the galaxy, it allows us to discover new findings of the potential danger beyond our planet and open the endless possibilities to learn about other territories that are habitable. Moreover, space exploration stimulates new scientific discoveries and the evolution of technology. For instance, the Chinese authority was able to detect possible incoming asteroids and predict the location of impact. Though it is true that the existing issues in our world should be prioritized, the funds put forth to space science can favour the development of advanced technology that are advantageous to our lives.
In conclusion, although there are certain opinions against space exploration, from my perspective, I believe that exploring the expanse beyond Earth can be beneficial in many ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, except for, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3119266055 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8318505158 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0825471341 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.615384615 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236536116298 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824126638622 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542918775662 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143235401288 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622821238797 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 10.9000537634 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.01818996416 125% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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