some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. other thinks that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer?
Before tendering my opinion I guess it's crucial to give quick glance on this argument on both sides. Some people are prefer teaching themselves and get more experience without teachers. But other agree that having teachers is much better. In my perspective, I concur with the second group of people whose agree that teacher’s impact their life in such properly way. Because of numerous reasons why I subscribe that attitude to elaborate cogently in the subsequent paragraphs.
First reason come to my mind consolidate my standpoint is teacher means our mentor and leader in this world. So, they considered the guidance to let our future bright enough and full of thrives and prosperity. Moreover, many studies claimed that teachers influence people lives in positively ways and changed people behavior and attitude by affecting their intelligence level and critical thinking as well.
Second reason coming to my mind consolidate my stand point is teachers will help people to raise their fundamental knowledge and intellectual capacity. Furthermore, teachers can make our learning much easier and convenient than studying by our-selves. For instance, I will talk about personal experience that I faced a couple of months ago when I failed my national board at the first attempt with a lot of sadness I was disparate. But, with my teacher which I had after failing my test, I just got a high score and I passed it. Also, with the encouragement and support from my teacher, friends, and my husband as well.
Additionally, we need to give some attention about an important aspect nationwide which is learning is not just reading books or novel. Nowadays, learning is essential for our life on this earth to get some experience from our teachers, ancestors, and parents as well. So, that’s why some people need to raise their skills and talents. We have to get teachers to lead us to build our future and achieve our goals. Many people they still have a good relations with their teachers especially a teacher from the primary school.
To but in brief, I strongly agree that teacher impacts people life and we still need them help in spite of unlimited access to technology in this century. In contrast to some un-educational people whose agree that learning from a teacher is useless. In nutshell, in fact there are multiple other factors supplement the aforementioned statement, which could be alluded here, but are not embraced due to the dearth of the time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...argument on both sides. Some people are prefer teaching themselves and get more experi...
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Line 7, column 455, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relation'?
Suggestion: relation
...als. Many people they still have a good relations with their teachers especially a teache...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, still, well, for instance, i guess, in brief, in contrast, in fact, in contrast to, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05365853659 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76827011917 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8618183327 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5238095238 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2380952381 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318801141388 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962166985304 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759294117751 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170849218541 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298787351136 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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