In recent a few decades, there has been a widespread debate on whether keeping away from others is better for the relationship or not. Personally, I believe that visiting the relates occasionally with staying away is better. I feel this way for three main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
The more people interact with each other, the more the problems increase. Therefore, is better for people to come and go. Also, keeping touch often is better, so the relationship does not end. My own experience is a good compelling example. I am from Saudi Arabia and last year, I started to study abroad in the United States. I was staying away almost from everybody that I have relation with. However, I regularly speak with my family and close friends by phone. This keeps my relationship strong even though I live away. On the contrary, when I was in Saudi Arabia, I see my family every day because I live with them. As a result, almost every week I have an issue with my sister. Therefore, I have realized that living away from family and friends are much better, because they tend to miss the good things about you.
In addition to interaction, staying away from relatives keeps the meeting in a positive way. In other words, when I meet my friend every day, I will talk about everything in my life. consequently, we will discuss things that are not related to our relationship such as politics. This will increase the tension between us because of the controversy. Seeing my friend, on the other hand, every week will lead to talk only about what he or she missed ( The positive information) eventually the meeting will end by talking only about ourselves.
Frankly speaking, sometimes staying away from relatives create also some issues such as why he or she does not call me and that time? So, people need to understand who they need to talk with more often and whom they do not. This will create a healthy relationship with all. For instance, I talk to my parents every week and with my friends every other day. My wife talks to her parents every three days and with her friends every two weeks. So, it depends on the person.
Finally, I strongly believe that being away from relatives is much better. This is mainly because it decreases the problems, and it keeps the meeting in a positive way.
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... the problems, and it keeps the meeting in a positive way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, frankly, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in addition, such as, as a result, in other words, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66423357664 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49222065605 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491484184915 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4849231675 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40740740741 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268494379228 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787749826259 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517596334139 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158975596331 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035630933143 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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