Some people think that we should keep away from others to improve our relationship, because being away from people reminds us of how important they are. Others think we should always stay with others to have good relationship because we can communicate with them more often. What do you think?
The question is whether people should be far away from each other for improving their relationship or not. Everyone with regard to his private view point can maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however, I am inclined to affirm that being far away will not solve any problem, even worse it can create some bigger troubles and then people will not be able to control them. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore them in following essay to empower my vantage point:
To begin with, two persons who are in a relationship know all aspects and corners of their friendship. Having awareness about problems and discerning them, is the most crucial solution in these types of cases. It goes without saying that when two individuals have been friend for a long time, they have adapted to their behavior; consequently, relying on each other for solving their troubles can lead them to remove all negative points from their friendship. Needless to say the collaboration of two minds is more effective than one.
The second reason for my arguments lies in the fact that nowadays around humans are unreliable and unpredictable. Unfortunately, the overwhelming majority of people observe themselves as a judge and they attempt to tender the opinions which are incorrect. One should not forget that when people are far away from each other, other human beings can impinge on them and their relationship. Their biased and unfair comments cause a relationship to approach to its end. It is often said that almost of friendships have been finished due to interference of strange people.
Moreover, the best way for optimizing a relationship is that two sides of a relationship make efforts to revive their memories such as going to the restaurant that they had meet each other for first time there or giving some favorite gifts and so on.
To sum up, this conclusion could be drawn that I strongly refute being far away in a relationship because the cold winds start blowing among two persons; hence, they should talk and consult each other to ease all of pains and problems.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, i feel, such as, to begin with, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92676056338 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67199692105 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588732394366 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1784157165 48.9658058833 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.538461538 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 5.45110844103 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274861962783 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103006751817 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10912532499 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161118091587 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520251759399 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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