Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Nowadays, traveling become a popular hobby for people. some people like to travel with a companion. other people prefer to travel alone. however, I strongly think that traveling with a companion is the better option because I can save time and money, get help from the friend and have more fun.
first, traveling with a companion is preferable because It saves us time and money. for example, when my friend and I wanted to go to the beach last year, we could share a room so that we both could pay less for the accommodation. Before going on that holiday, we also shared the works we had to do, for instance, I found a good hotel and booked the hotel room while my friend was finding some beautiful and Interesting places for us to visit. thus, we did not waste so much time to find the hotel and the places and we spent less money on traveling.
second, traveling with a companion is better because when your friend or you have some troubles, you or your friend can help each other get over them.. for instance, a few years ago, my friend and I tried to climb up the highest mountain in Vietnam. when we climbed a half of the mountain, I got a serious cold. before we went on the expedition, I did not prepare carefully so that I did not bring the medicines. but my friend brought all the medicines that I needed. therefore, I felt better and continued the adventure.
finally, I think traveling with a companion is the right choice because I can have more fun. for example, I and my friend usually go traveling together. besides, we not only took the photo of the places we had visited but also played games together. both I and my friend have the same hobby so we can have more fun and good memories with each others.
in conclusion, I feel that traveling with a friend is the correct one. I believe this because traveling with a friend saves us time and money makes more fun and good time together and brings us help of our friends
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'i think', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.193467336683 0.229887763892 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.170854271357 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0653266331658 0.0866891130778 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0577889447236 0.046263068375 125% => OK
Pronouns: 0.108040201005 0.0685040099705 158% => OK
Prepositions: 0.103015075377 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0301507537688 0.0351676179071 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.40412403696 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0201005025126 0.0309702414327 65% => OK
Particles: 0.00251256281407 0.00188951952338 133% => OK
Determiners: 0.100502512563 0.0887237588012 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0150753768844 0.0209618222197 72% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00753768844221 0.0139019557991 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1939.0 2387.08602151 81% => OK
No of words: 359.0 408.028673835 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40111420613 5.86048508987 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.286908077994 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.181058495822 0.251872472559 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122562674095 0.174417080927 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.091922005571 0.112833075102 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40412403696 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448467966574 0.524397521467 86% => OK
Word variations: 46.0423978612 59.2087087015 78% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.8947368421 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.294585285 48.84282405 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.052631579 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.894736842105 0.644075263715 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.54480286738 325% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 37.0005864243 45.7405998639 81% => OK
Elegance: 0.970149253731 1.45489161554 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216331044186 0.300154397459 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126426465416 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.1185290431 0.0752933317313 157% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51601709028 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155087323636 0.151897553556 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112712576221 0.114077575197 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169852432222 0.0781384742642 217% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346943909043 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0389014236212 0.067059652881 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156638724241 0.210909579961 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131533065563 0.0618886996521 213% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
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Rates: 60 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations to cover all aspects.