It goes without saying that, we as Homo sapiens, live in an age when our lifestyle has undergone profound changes and became more sophisticated. By this definition, the swift and monumental scientific and technological achievements have brought convenience with itself. Therefore, peoples can arbitrary select to their working conditions contrary to the past that people were busy mostly on agrarian business inherited from ancestors. Whereas, nowadays employees are free to some extent to choose whether to work in the office or at home. The following essay takes an elaborating look at the advantage of which one outweighs the other to reach a logical conclusion.
There is no denying that the emergence of computers ensued to this question has been asked from us; because before the existence of computers workers has only one option, work in the office. Indeed, computers allow clerks to handle their occupations from remote. Hence, by this wonderful revolution, the personnel of a firm or administration in some cases are not required to have physical attendance. So, this means, low traffic congestion, saving energy consumption, higher efficiency, quick completion of project and reduction in costs. For instance, suppose a particular company has hired some staff, the transportation and food for staff imposes a lot of money on the firm; where can be easily eliminated by working in the home.
Additionally, when the employees control their tasks far from the office they are beside the family and this leads to consolidated relation among family members especially strong emotional bond with a mate. Admittedly, being in the home dramatically drops the stress and workers feel relaxed to exert all potential and subsequently accomplishing the project successfully. A group of sociologists and psychologists carried out an investigation, at ANU University, to find out how working far from office is remedial. Ultimately, they announced that this method reduces the rate of divorce, the firm costs, and traffic volume by 15%, 45% and 32% respectively.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned materials we can reach a conclusive conclusion that the advantages of working at home outweigh working in the office. Generally, fast complement with low cost and less stress are outstanding features of working at home
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37158469945 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08762512088 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620218579235 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7535969361 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.875 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220721344659 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066935097891 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688932944973 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141352344013 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711015618912 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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