Some people like to work at home, while others prefer to work in the office. Which do you prefer and why
Technology changed people`s lives in a variety of ways. For instance, in past, people had to go to offices in order to work and there was no alternative to that. However, with the advent of new technologies and facilities, nowadays, people have the option to choose where and how they prefer to work. A myriad of companies suggest that the workers can do their job at home and they do not have to go to the office. Although working at home may have some merits, I still prefer working in an office. In the following paragraphs, I am going to elaborate on my point of view.
First of all, offices are the places which are designed for working, not homes. For instance, they are equipped with work desks and computers and papers and pens are available there. So one does not have to prepare work stuff for himself and can easily use the available materials. It is not only about the work stuff, but also the work situation. It is axiomatic that for achieving the most yield, one needs to concentrate and be focused, and it is not possible without being in an office which is quiet and suitable for this purpose.
Secondly, one of the most significant factors in increasing the work efficiency is collaborating with colleagues. This collaboration will increase the efficiency and also may lead to innovations. One can ask questions and learn new things by working with others and offices are the best places where people can work together and improve their knowledge widely. Not only will it improve the quality of work but also will make the job easier for every individual.
Last but not the least, by working in an office, one does not have to be worried about work stuff all the time and can just leave the work in office. Also it will give people a rigid schedule which can make people more programmed/disciplined in all the aspects of life. Having exact time to work will make it easier to manage the time and prevent spending too much on work, or hobbies. Some psychological studies have been conducted comparing the people who work at home and the people who work in an office, and the results surprisingly proved that the people who work at home suffered from depression more.
To wrap it up, I contend that working in an office is more efficient and it will lead to a better yield. Although working at home may seem to be more comfortable in the/at first sight, it is not at the end. I suggest people think deeply and I am sure they will understand the merits of working in an office. After all, life does not always have to be easy and comfortable and some hard work is needed for making a desirable society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
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Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... and can just leave the work in office. Also it will give people a rigid schedule wh...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., it is not at the end. I suggest people think deeply and I am sure they will und...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, after all, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57961783439 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61716706117 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445859872611 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7524019942 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7826086957 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4782608696 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388323796302 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121248331327 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964295773525 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233138158031 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932722946206 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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