Students must be graded, in your opinion what type of assessment is the best? write an exam, write an essay or give a presentation.
Friends are people with who we have a close relationship and spend most of our time. Thus they play essential roles in our lifeAs friends play essential roles in our daily life. A question might arise is that what characteristic is most important when making friends. . Some think it is better to make friends with intelligent people. Personally, I am of the opinion that people with sense of humor is the better choice. I feel this way because of two reasons which I will discuss in this essay.
First of all, spending time with people with a sense of humor can help you to unwind your stress and give your mind a sense of relief. As we all know, people nowadays have to deal with different kinds of pressure in their daily life, such as work, social connection, family issue. They are prone to suffer from stress and anxiety. Therefore, they need an outlet. Humorous friends can be a good choice, because they can always find a way to entertain others. For example, when I graduated from college, I tried to find a job. However, all the available positions were quickly taken. I was so stressed out that I avoid talking to anybody. Knowing this, my friend Jack came over immediately and tried his best to cheer me up. After a while, I felt relaxed and more confident. I am sure if Jack had not come, I would not be able to make it.
Second, people with a sense of humor always put others first. As I mentioned above, they always try their best to entertain others. In contrast, intelligent people usually think of themselves first. In other word, they are more likely to be selfish. For example, I used to have a clever friend in high school, who was always at the top rank in the class. Once, I asked him for help with my math because I got difficulties in understanding calculus. Being afraid that I would do better than him, he refused. Therefore, I think humorous people are better choice for friends.
In conclusion, I believe it is better to make friends with humorous people. This is because they can help reduce stress and because they are less likely to be selfish.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, whereas, while, as to, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, in short, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41098901099 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61072259713 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.441758241758 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 660.6 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2636454794 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1923076923 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27499992047 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827317544281 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704919516318 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178958690647 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325225762495 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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