Succesful in life is a crucial things that all people concern. some individuals believe that they can get the successful by doing only things they know. Other think trying to do something new and adverture is important for successful. In my perspective, I concur with previous statement. Doing new things and take risk is a paramount factor to success. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a few reasons to explain my point of view.
First and foremost, try to do new tasks is very important. This will widen our scope and make us feel more confidence. it will teach people how to face difficul situation and find correct solution. Take this example from my real live. When I was in third year in dental school, patient came to clinic where I was work with fracture tooth. my professor ask students who can take this tooth off. In the beginning, we all hesitated that no one can do it. Me and other student decide to make challenge. My professor choice me to do this work. I did my best and review all my information will might help me in this case. In the end, I can do it. from that time and till now, I never be afraid to do any tasks. I try to manage any problem carefully. From this example, we can figure out it is important to try every thing new, since we can not improve yourself by doing things that used to do them.
In addition, other reason springs to my mind is, even we did mistake from doing risk. These mistake will strength us and we learn how to avoid such fault in the future. We are a human beings. doing mistake is a part of live. for instance my young brother invested their money in stock. He lost his money first trail because. he did not have any experience. But in the second and third time, he understand the lesson and with time , he gained a lot of money and compenset his first lost. As we see, without trying ,my brother can not learn even there is a risk in his trying.
in conclusion, this statement is as persuasive as it stands. Based on exposition that are mentioned above. making risk give as oportunity to learn and booster our confidence.
Succesful in life is a crucial things that all people concern. some individules believe that they can get the successful by doing only things they know. Other think trying to do something new and adverture is important for successful. In my percepctive, I concur with previous statement. Doning new things and take risk are paramout factor to success. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a few reasons to explain my point of view.
First and foremost, try to do new tasks is very impotant. This will widen our scope and make us feel more convidence. it will teach people how to face difficul situation and find correct solution. Take this example from my real live. When I was in third year in dental school, pateint came to clinic where I was work with fracture tooth. my professor ask students who can take this tooth off. In the begining, we all hesitated that no one can do it. Me and other student decide to make challenge. My professor choise me to do this work. I did my best and review all my information will might help me in this case. In the end, I can do it. from that time and till now, I never be afraid to do any tasks. I try to manage any problem carefuly.From this example, we can figure out it is important to try every thing new, since we can not improve yourself by doing things that used to do them.
In addition, other reason springs to my mind is, even we did mistake from doing risk. These mistake will strenghth us and we learn how to avoid such fault in the future. We are a human beings. doing mistake is a part of live. for instance my young brother invested their money in stock. He lost his money first trail because. he did not have any experience. But in the second and third time, he understand the lesson and with time , he gained a lot of money and compenset his first lost. As we see, without trying ,my brother can not learn even there is a risk in his trying.
in conclusion, this statement is as persuasive as it stands. Based on exposition that are mentioned above. making risk give as oportunity to learn and booster our convedence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41298701299 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43542745339 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548051948052 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.146193111 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.8064516129 100.406767564 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4193548387 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41935483871 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379452271736 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089785263816 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126271444282 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238096641926 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.256845773181 0.0645574589148 398% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.41 10.9000537634 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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