Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.
Job and job security have been a big worry since human live in a society. Nowadays, with the unique world village it is so hard to be update so that you can a good job without need to improve yourself in a continues way. Some people believe that in the past it was easier to find what type of job should lead to a secure, successful future, while some disagree. in my point of view, in this high level professional job market you should be very smart to find a good secure and successful carrier. The following prageraph will discuse this issue more.
First and foremost, with the big advancment in sciencs and technologies many of jobs and carriers need high level of education or skills, which get the job positions more difficult to afford by ordinary people. For instance, my brother apply to work in a pharmacy after getting the pharmacy technicien license after 6 months classes and field education. After starting this job, he found that he should participate to a series of co-education classes while he is working to review his license. I think some decades ago, working in such easy job did not need such huge tedious education and practicing.
The second reason that should be considered is, this improvement in the economy and existence of huge companies that are working in each field like retail, it is very difficult for personal interprenoure to start a spurting business and job. For example, there are many companies which they are looking for any innovative or creative idea, to invest huge money on them. these kind of companies buy the new ideas cheap from the young inventors and after providing the new brand products with the huge amount of cash flow they can combat with any individual investor. It is clear, that nobody can make a successful business alone and compete with this multi millionair companies.
To make a long story short, it should be mentioned that secure and successful jobs are more demanding in this high specialized world. Any kind of jobs need contemporary investigation and research to remain in the job market alive. This should be teach to young job seeker that they should prepare themselves to be updated every time to achieve their goals of a secure a money-making job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78441558442 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5994459495 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537662337662 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4458269789 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.125 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0475712420335 0.236089414692 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0174417017979 0.076458572812 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254252603324 0.0737576698707 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0322461887905 0.150856017488 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019872449431 0.0645574589148 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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