A teacher’s ability to relate well with students is more important than excellent knowledge
of the subject being taught.
I disagree with the idea that the possessing the ability to relate well with student is more
important than excellent knowledge of the subject being taught for a teacher. There are several
reasons why I disagree with that idea.
First, teachers’ job is to educate their student with their knowledge. The ability to relate well
with their student is something a counselor should possess, not a teacher.
That’s why the board of education gives an award to a teacher with an excellent knowledge of
the subject they teach. Teachers who can get along with their students but have no knowledge
can be popular and be liked by his or her students, however I don’t consider a teacher with no
knowledge a good teacher.
Second, Students go to schools because they want to learn knowledge from their teachers not to
get along with their teachers. I knew a math teacher who was well known among other
mathematics teachers. Some students always complained how he never entertains his students
which made many of his students to fall asleep. Nevertheless, all of his classes were all full even
before the semester began because many students who were eager to learn already booked in. He
won the Apples prize (it’s given to a noticed teacher annually) a couple of times and that enabled
students to firmly believe in his way of teaching.
Thirdly, teachers are responsible for conceding their knowledge to their next generation.
Teachers already had an experience of getting advantaged education from college. Teachers
should not let that previlege become useless and workless. We all learn because we want to
become the better person that this world needs. Students will also eventually grow up to be
influencing other people and teachers should volunteerily be their students’ role models.
For conclusion, I think the most important quality a teacher must have is an excellent knowledge
of the subject they teach, not an ability to relate well with their students.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, nevertheless, second, so, third, thirdly, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14110429448 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63062877672 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51226993865 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.601191453 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5882352941 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.53405017921 507% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500346992206 0.236089414692 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17011418082 0.076458572812 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18511954051 0.0737576698707 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152916415853 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11946833214 0.0645574589148 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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