Teachers are a crucial factor in kids education process. Success of students relay on how are their professors prescribe subjects perfectly. As a result, student can get a high score which help them in future to get dream career. In my perspective, I concur that universities should pay more money for professors wages. In the following paragraphs, I will explore a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
To begin with, funding for professor' salaries is important to improve their products. Teachers will feel more comfortable and less stress. Therefore, they can do their job with out any pressure our concern. As a result, students can take a benefits by getting a best education. For example, in our country, government pay little cost for teachers. This encourage them to looking for another job at same time in order to support their families and provide their demadns. Since, they always feel tired and strees because they anxious about finance. They do not take time to prepare a good cruiculums to students. That why, education process in back home is very low guality. As we can see the importance of spend adequte money on teachers salaries to support them financially and make them more convenient for successful of education process.
In addition, when professors funded by government, this will add advantages for school. As we said, more comfortable teachers mean good results. Students will get more knowledege and skills, and they will graduated with high grades. This will improve reputation of these schools between people. Students will choose these collage which are become famous to attend them. Hence, these universities have a good professors who teach students with advance lessons. For instance, Harvard university is a very famous. All students desire to attend this school. Moreover, increase in number of students mean increase in school budget. In conclusion. support professor financially has many benefits: to professors, students and universities.
To sum up, the statement is as persuasive as it stands. This is based on expositions mentioned above. Spend more money on wage for professors will have triple benefits. improve education process, make teachers more comfortable and increase students demand to attend this school.
Teachers are a crucial factor in kids education process. Success of students relay on how are their professors prescribe subjects perfectly. As a result, student can get a high score which help them in future to get dream career. In my perspective, I concur that universities should pay more money for professors wages. In the following paragraphs, I will explore a couple reasons to explain my point of view.
To begin with, funding for professor' salaries is important to improve their products. Teachers will feel more comfortable and less stress. Therefore, they can do their job with out any pressure our concern. As a result, students can take a benefits by getting a best education. For example, in our country, government pay little cost for teachers. This encourage them to looking for a nother job at same time in order to support their families and provide their demans. Since, they always feel tired and strees because they anxious about finance. They do not take time to preper a good cruiculum to students. That why, education process in back home is very low guality. As we can see the importance of spend a dequet money on teachers salaries to support them financialy and make them more conventient for succesful of education process.
In addition, when professors funded by government, this will add a dvantages for school. As we said, more comfortable teachers mean good results. Students will get more knowledege and skills, and they will graduated with high grades. This will improve reputation of these schools between peopls. Students will choose these collage which are become famous to attend them. Hence, these universities have a good professors who teach students with advance lessons. For instance, Harvered university is a very famous. All students desire to attend this school. Moreover, increase in number of students mean increase in school budget. In conclusion. support professor financially has many benefits: to professors, students and universities.
To sum up, the statement is as persuasive as it stands. This is based on expositions mentioed above. Spend more money on wage for professors will have triple benefites. improve education process, make teachers more comfortable and increase students demand to attend this school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21643835616 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76989688745 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539726027397 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.042867205 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.6551724138 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5862068966 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.48275862069 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358504512873 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091189730759 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123675177142 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263735759357 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.224456391918 0.0645574589148 348% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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