Teachers are paramount factor in student education process. They should their best to teach kids crucial things which are essential for their futur. The question is , whether teachers shouls share their political thoughts with their students or not. This can be weighed in many aspects. . To me, I concue with statement, teachers should not talk about their social or political ideas in the classroom. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view in this subject.
To begin with, sharing students with political issues will misleading them. especialy , when he did wrong decision. when teacher make his thought known to classroom, their student will imitate him. Every one know how students like their teachers and admire their views, especialy because, they spend long time each day inschool with them. this is compelling example explain my stand point, my young brother in high school. in last cycle of voting, no one deserve to vote. because they will not do any thing for people in the futur. My brother listen to him and did not vote. After while, he blame himselfe because he did not give his voice to one who favorat. Fom this example, we can see the effect of teacher on student decision.
Second, talking about things which are not included in sylable is wasting of time. If teacher talk about any subject during claasroom time, like sharing student his social views. This will spend time that have to be used for teaching process rather than talkind about some thing else. For instance, when teacher discuss any private suject with his student in class. one student may has a different thought about this case. They will be start to arguing and explain point of view to each other which may take longe time. This will fustrated other students who come to school to learn and understand academic classes not talking in other things. This example explain, how sharing other subjects in classroom will retarded education plan.
Inconclusion, this statement is as persuasive as it stands. This is based on exposition which are mentioned above. talking about political or social experience with student will mislead students thought and will waste time of class therefore distracts teaching program.
Teachers are paramount factor in student education process. They should their best to teach kids crucial things which are essential for their futur. The question is , whether teachers shouls share their political thoughts with their students or not. This can be weighed in many aspects. . To me, I concue with statement, teachers should not talk about their social or political ideas in the classroom. In the following essay, I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view in this subject.
To begin with, sharing students with political issues will misleading them. especialy , when he did wrong decision. when teacher make his thought known to classroom, their student will imitate him. Every one know how students like their teachers and admire their views, especialy because, they spend long time each day inschool with them. this is compelling example explain my stand point, my young brother in high school. in last cycle of voting, no one deserve to vote. because they will not do any thing for people in the futur. My brother listen to him and did not vote. After while, he blame himselfe because he did not give his voice to one who favorat. Fom this example, we can see the effect of teacher on student decision.
Second, talking about things which are not included in sylable is wasting of time. If teacher talk about any subject during claasroom time, like sharing student his social views. This will spend time that have to be used for teaching process rather than talkind about some thing else. For instance, when teacher discuss any private suject with his student in class. one student may has a different thought about this case. They will be start to arguing and explain point of view to each other which may take longe time. This will fustrated other students who come to school to learn and understand academic classes not talking in other things. This example explain, how sharing other subjects in classroom will retarded education plan.
Inconclusion, this statement is as persuasive as it stands. This is based on exposition which are mentioned above. talking about political or social experience with student will mislead students thought and will waste time of class therefore distracts teaching program.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01336898396 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32693885668 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534759358289 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1488305252 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.4444444444 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8518518519 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88709677419 286% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496068691805 0.236089414692 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139601582534 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157860175498 0.0737576698707 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346421090995 0.150856017488 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.243435691424 0.0645574589148 377% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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