Telecommuting (working for a company from home rather than in the office and communicating with the office by computer) is becoming more and more common. Discuss the advantages of telecommuting versus working in an office. Then indicate which you prefer and why.
Before tendering my opinion I guess I need to take quick glance on this argument on both side. Some people believe that telecommuting is the best nowadays. But, others prefer working in an office and that’s seems very reasonable. I concur with the first group of people whose agree that working from home is much easier. Because of numerous reasons why I subscribed that attitude elaborating cogently in the subsequent paragraphs.
First reason come to my mind consolidating my stand point is technology nowadays affect our life in positively ways. Also, according to the advantage of working from home is much easier, convenient, and practical as well. For instance, working from home avoid people going to the work and get stuck with traffic. Furthermore, that will help especially in crowded cities rather than urban cities. Also, working from home seems much safer because will decrease accident and that considered life threading issue in people’s life. Opposite to the working in an office which become more risky due to some cars collision every day.
Second reason I need to give it some attention is that telecommuting save people’s time and that will allow people to get enough time to spend with their families. For instance, I’m a full time employee and I always struggling to have sufficient time to spend with my toddler daughter and my husband. In contrast to working at office is considered wasting time by driving, looking for parking lot, and taking few minutes to get to the office.
Additionally, plethora of people claimed that working from home and communicate with the office by computer is impact employee’s life in properly ways. Personally, I prefer working from my home rather than go to the office because this concept seems very reasonable to me and will make my life much easier. Like for example, instead of going to the office and wasting my time, I can do my work from home, monitor my daughter and read my favorite book as well. Moreover, that will raise my fundamental knowledge and my critical thinking.
To put it in brief, I strongly agree that the world become different from than in the past few decades. Technology changed our personality, skills, and talents in positive path. This idea in my perspective will become used nationwide because it improve intellectual level of people’s mind. In nutshell, in fact there are multiple other factors supplement the aforementioned statement, which could be alluded here, but are not embraced due to the dearth of the time
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i guess, in brief, in contrast, in fact, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1028708134 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85326474566 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9867554188 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9545454545 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86363636364 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292918324823 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910622588236 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079807112945 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16406957226 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732999271065 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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