Telling the truth
The question being asked is if telling the truth is an important consideration in any relationship between people. This is an important issue because honesty is one of the fundamental values of a person. In my opinion, I believe that telling the truth is a highly important consideration in any relationship because the relationships cannot be founded and supported in lies. Honesty should be the structure of a person and any relationship.
The first point that deserves to be mentioned is related to the moral values of the people. In these times, educational institutions don’t give to the student a minimal education in values, telling the truth should be learned at the school since a person is a child. Additionally, the schooling should be based to educate people in the apprenticeship of being a good person and not in being a liar and in achieving their accomplishment in life through cheating people through lies.
Another point that worth to be outlined is related to the cultural level of the society and how the ignorants achieve their goals. People tend to tell lies in order to receive recognition of the communities. Often, they get used to telling lie to get personal benefits. For instance, people tell lies in an interview for a job in order to get a job with a better salary, or people tell lies in a relationship to get be accepted for others and in this way began a sentimental relationship. Notwithstanding, liars soon or later will be caught in their lies, and will defraud the people who give them the confidence in beginning a relationship. In a final analysis, cheating people is not an outstanding business because when people discover the lies, honest people won’t trust in liars never and ever, and this means loose in all aspects including business too.
Aside from the points that I made above, sometimes people becuase in some moments of life people need to tell some lies in order to avoid the suffering of their beloved. For instance, in highly difficult situations parents have to tell their children lies in order to avoid worrying the children and also because children don't have the age and maturity to understand the gravity of a problem.
In a word owing to the aforementioned causes and elucidations, it appears to be reasonable to deduce the well-founded conclusion that telling the truth is the most outstanding business that people could do. People should tell the truth in order to preserve a relationship and don’t hurt the feelings of their beloveds in most of the cases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2120.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94172494172 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97412696116 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445221445221 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1557399384 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.705882353 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2352941176 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260224991122 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106516379069 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10653199257 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172336134857 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860905227195 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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