There is no shortage of opinion on that the fruit of hard work is sweet and tasty. Due to this fact, I disagree to say that success solely depends on luck and hard work had no role in this. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, success is built over consistent effort over a long period of time. A few years before, in our childhood, it is taught that ‘success is not an overnight dream’. Consequently, this is embedded in the thoughts and activities, and even during the time of failure, this motto fuels a person towards success. Thus, constant effort and perseverance turn failure into stepping stones towards success. This can be better demonstrated by the example of Thomas Alva Edison, who made dozens of stunning inventions. In the journey to the invention of the electric bulb, he failed many times. But he was not willing to give up. Eventually, as a result of numerous sleepless nights he won. This boosted his confidence to continue his explorations in the field of science and physics. Therefore, only determination and hard work can bring out success.
Secondly, success is a result of combining research, education and planning. In particular, with the discovery of the project management principles and the success improvement tools, a person aspiring to become successful in any domain can easily achieve the expected results. In this process, the word luck should be replaced with proper planning. This can be better demonstrated with my personal experience. When was working as the head of quality improvement in a hospital, the accreditation process seemed to be an unachievable target. But with proper guidance from the experienced people and by using the process improvement toolkit, I managed to fulfil the requirements. As a result, the organization was accredited. So, it is certainly clear that preplanned studies can pave the way to success.
There is no shortage of opinion on that the fruit of hard work is sweet and tasty. Due to this fact, I disagree to say that success solely depends on luck and hard work had no role in this. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, success is built over consistent effort over a long period of time. A few years before, in our childhood, it is taught that ‘success is not an overnight dream’. Consequently, this is embedded in the thoughts and activities, and even during the time of failure, this motto fuels a person towards success. Thus, constant effort and perseverance turn failure into stepping stones towards success. This can be better demonstrated by the example of Thomas Alva Edison, who made dozens of stunning inventions. In the journey to the invention of the electric bulb, he failed many times. But he was not willing to give up. Eventually, as a result of numerous sleepless nights he won. This boosted his confidence to continue his explorations in the field of science and physics. Therefore, only determination and hard work can bring out success.
Secondly, success is a result of combining research, education and planning. In particular, with the discovery of the project management principles and the success improvement tools, a person aspiring to become successful in any domain can easily achieve the expected results. In this process, the word luck should be replaced with proper planning. This can be better demonstrated with my personal experience. When was working as the head of quality improvement in a hospital, the accreditation process seemed to be an unachievable target. But with proper guidance from the experienced people and by using the process improvement toolkit, I managed to fulfil the requirements. As a result, the organization was accredited. So, it is certainly clear that preplanned studies can pave the way to success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd work had no role in this. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will e...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...uilt over consistent effort over a long period of time. A few years before, in our childhood, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, i feel, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05279503106 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94396342428 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1078003017 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4761904762 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410482128107 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109327386537 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162929949674 0.0737576698707 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.377086639732 0.150856017488 250% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.343941381356 0.0645574589148 533% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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