Today more people are overweight than ever before. In your opinion what are the primary cause of this. What measures to overcome this epidemic?
No one can deny the fact that in this modern era we have everything available whatever we want conveniently than it used to be before and one of them is fast food. Owing to this, people are becoming obese and if it is not controlled in time then it will lead to health haphazard. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explain in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence, varieties of junk food are available in the market. To be more precise, although they are not healthy people prefer to consume it because it is tasty in one hand and easily accessible in other hand. In addition, many people are working personnel these days so they do not have time to prepare meal at home. This results in approaching easy way to obtain lunch that is fast food. Needless to say, with the advancement in technology there are many such sites through which we can order food online without having to step out a single step and thus this is making people lazy day by day which consequently results in gaining more and more weight. Moreover, this has a detrimental repercussion in their health. They might suffer from the diseases like diabetes, blood pressure, heart attack and so on which even can lead to the death. Therefore, people should be mindful of these ramifications and should consume outside food in limited amount.
Next, how long people want to live utterly depends on themself. If they show negligency in eating habit and do not even dare to control then this will cost to their health. Furthermore, in order to mitigate their weight problem, first and foremost thing they need to do is say no to fast food. Although, people do not much time for preparing their meal they must manage time and focus on consuming home made meal. Additionally, nobody is too busy if they desire to do something then they surly manage their time to do so. Similarly, exercise is a must for everyone if they wish to remain healthy but especially for obese people. Doing physical activity daily could be fruitful for them in losing weight as it aid in melting their unnecessary fats from their body. Hence, along with consuming junk food in little amount if they manage to maintain their health then this could not worsen health in a devasting way.
All things considered, unquestionably people today are more obese than people used to be before and this is percipitated by easy access of fast food people’s busy life. Having said that, this can be controlled by forcing on homemade food more instead of junk items and on top of it regular exercise is welcoming for everyone.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69469026549 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50407687005 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511061946903 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8043365248 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.047619048 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5238095238 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154030019356 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534459718857 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054292450809 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128048735667 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622216666669 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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