Today the world is really busy and crowded so we should not expect politeness from anyone. agree and disagree
It is undeniable that people nowadays are more busy and introverted as compared to the last decades but still people respect each other. I disagree with the statement that we should not expect politeness from each other. In my opinion, irrespective of crowdedness, everyone would be polite in their own way. I feel this way for two main reasons which I explain in the following essay.
First of all, manners are the part of life and it is not linked with the busy or crowdedness. People still respect and behave with good manners to each other. For instance, when I was in my school, students ran away to the canteen during the break period but teachers explained and taught us the rules and manners like how to behave in a crowded place by not giving jerks to one another. This means that people learn the basic living style from school and as a result, the development of politeness comes from the early age of life.
Secondly, It is true that some people are rude due to their lifestyle and that's not mean that we should not expect politeness from everyone. Life has pros and cons and it could be balanced by balancing the pros and cons. Everyone has different personality issues however, if we focus on our diet and lifestyle we can easily change our behaviour and eventually develop and boost our positive vibes. For example, When I was in high school. I shifted to the hostel and due to lack of attention I was not able to focus on my diet and slowly, I became addicted to junk foods. Furthermore, I realised that I had a more rude and irritated personality disorder and that I changed my diet plan and tried to live a healthy life. After some time, I feel more energetic and helpful to others.
In conclusion, people should respect manners irrespective of being crowded or busy because manners and respect are the basic skills which we learn in the schools and that makes our energy in a positive way and helpful for others.
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...n the schools and that makes our energy in a positive way and helpful for others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5878962536 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48310655626 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49855907781 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2448739138 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 5.45110844103 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176496861806 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602597080104 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912723104528 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114854380222 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358548228984 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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