First of all, learning in a traditional class make you more social.Even though some people find old teaching style old fashioned, students become much more social by the attending classes regularly. They meet with each others, agrue about some lectures and shares ideas. It is a kind of prepareation for proffesional business life.
Secondly, school is a obligation if you want to learn something new. Students who in a stage acquaring new knowlegde should study more in order to reach their goals an potential. Listening the teacher steadily increase their motivation and boosts their success.
Thirdly, if students attend the classes they can guess what question will be ask on the exams. Actually,teachers sometimes give clues about exams during the lecture. Listening the teacher in a silent environment and taking note may be helpful for students. Furthermore, even some students take voice record of lectures and listen it over and over.
To wrap it up, taking all aforementioned reasons into the account, one can conclude that student should come to the class to get new ideas. It is not only help to broad their horizon, but also gives the key of being success in the exams.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
... traditional class make you more social.Even though some people find old teaching st...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... business life. Secondly, school is a obligation if you want to learn somethi...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...tudy more in order to reach their goals an potential. Listening the teacher steadi...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , teachers
...stion will be ask on the exams. Actually,teachers sometimes give clues about exams during...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, even so, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 1977.66487455 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 196.0 407.700716846 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08163265306 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.48103885553 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7478362242 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683673469388 0.524837075471 130% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 618.680645161 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5771634888 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.45110844103 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197121140777 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618827973366 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418657597567 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110626060356 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328466416019 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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