Education is one of the most important things in our society, from learning new information, to meeting new people, going to university has many advantages.
I think individuals receive a college educations for two main reasons.
To begin with, you learn a lot from your professors and their experiences, which not only help you see the world more broadly, but also make you think significantly about your place on the world. For instance, my friend, Asrar, didn't know what she wanted to do, and was often unsure about her place in the world. However, when she attended university, she was drawn to the Education of autistic children, and found her interest piqued by ways to improve their lives. Which made her feel like she had a purpose to fulfill.
Additionally, a lot of companies don't hire or even interview anybody who didn't acquire a college degree. Consequently, having no higher education can prove to be an obstacle in one's lively-hood. For example, I saw my mother's struggle to find a job due to the fact that she didn't receive a college education, which led her to be determined to take night classes to further her education.
Lastly, going to university is a extremely good way to meet new people and make long lasting relationships. I have witnessed this when my cousin Abrar found a job because her friend from college told her about an opening in her company, because she knew my cousin's work ethic and determination to learn.
Thus, attending university and receiving an education is one of the pillars of a content life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, lastly, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86037735849 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79324313141 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618867924528 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5122060341 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179676823203 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669626048197 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457256611907 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996668983159 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238030291176 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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