Topic 2: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The parents are first people whom a person knows. Also, The home is first place which a person lives in. A person brings up with them. They are our first teacher in the lifetime. They learn us walking, eating, and other vital activities. I think it is not fair if we do not tell that, ''The parents are the best teachers''. So, I agree with the statement that parents are the best teachers.
On the other hand, we should not forget that there are some parents who are not responsible for their children. We can see some children of this kind of parents in the street. Child labors are produced by this kind of parents. It is too annoying when you see a little child while is begging or cleaning a car for a little money.
All in all, I think it is better to divide parents into two categories: Responsible parents and irresponsible parents. First, This kind of parents totally pay attention to the future of their children. They learn them how to communicate in the society, how to track their goals, how to manage their life. In the fact, this kind of parents are excellent teachers and The successful people in the community are lived in a responsible family.
Second, This kind of parents do no pay attention to the future of their children. They do not learn them the initial and necessary activities. They ignore the children's needs. I could tell, the children do not be brought up in an appropriate atmosphere. They can not track their goals in a reasonable way. as a matter of fact, we can not consider this kind of parents as teachers.
Finally,when we say that the parents are the best teacher in our lifetime, we are talking about the parents who are responsible for their children and help them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'i think', 'kind of', 'talking about', 'as a matter of fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204022988506 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.158045977011 0.158761421928 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0718390804598 0.0866891130778 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0402298850575 0.046263068375 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0977011494253 0.0685040099705 143% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.109195402299 0.118717715034 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0258620689655 0.0351676179071 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51806385061 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0172413793103 0.0309702414327 56% => OK
Particles: 0.00574712643678 0.00188951952338 304% => OK
Determiners: 0.120689655172 0.0887237588012 136% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014367816092 0.0209618222197 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0258620689655 0.0139019557991 186% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1705.0 2387.08602151 71% => OK
No of words: 308.0 408.028673835 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53571428571 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.285714285714 0.338922669872 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.211038961039 0.251872472559 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.133116883117 0.174417080927 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0941558441558 0.112833075102 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51806385061 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448051948052 0.524397521467 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.6995126548 59.2087087015 74% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7777388679 48.84282405 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 120.699889404 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 35.1038961039 45.7405998639 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.14563106796 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322147064063 0.300154397459 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130933063456 0.103427244359 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0871342500697 0.0752933317313 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.493389989872 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157091604642 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124624059799 0.114077575197 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943775183336 0.0781384742642 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.308512904861 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.080243518237 0.067059652881 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221568044792 0.210909579961 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696508459666 0.0618886996521 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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