It has been said that education is the greatest virtue of life. The educators have to provide ample amount of resources amongst the students in divergent fields such as studies, sports and social activities. We have been living in a society where we have learnt our norms and values. We cannot live alone. We always need company to move forward. Only studying cannot broaden our mind to look better prospectives. To be a better human being, we should maintain good health and learn to work together and live in harmony. Therefore, I completely adhere with the statement that at universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. There are a host of benefits of sports and social works in our daily lives. With the advent of science and technology, the efficacy of these subjects are widely known to everyone.
First, let's begin with sports. Sports have the pivotal role in making the healthy lifestyle and never giving up attitude in people. An individual can take off all the castigation and move forward to work hard from the sportsmanship he learns from sports. It has been both intrinsic and extrinsic factor of happiness for number of people. It is even taken as a perfect recreational tool. From the time immemorial, sports have been taken as the bridge between hundred of nations. For instance, the Olympics games. In the same way, the rigorous work done during sports helps people understand the value of hard work and sweat. This is very applicable in real life situation too. Life is never a bed of roses. We have to grapple for our survival. Losing cannot determine our future. If one door shuts at our face, multiple doors will be opened for us. We should never give up our hopes. This is what sports teach us. If better resources are given for sports, students will learn more to live a healthier life and a way better thought process. Who knows? A potential sportsman could be born who could represent the country to the world. For an instance, football, cricket, basketball, etc., have been celebrated by millions of people globally. So, there is no bad in promoting sports in educational sectors where both studying and playing are given equal significance.
Second, being a social animal, it has been always a part of every human being to live in harmonious life. Social activities are helping out the people in need or managing the resources for the members of the society so that they can have a safe and peace living. Cleaning up the society, plantation, awareness generating programs, collecting funds for needy people, working for the stray animals, promoting good health and much more, all of these come under social activities. Living life is not worth if we are unable to cogitate for society and people. Social activity is a benevolent act. Hence, social activities are to be promoted from universities and colleges. It will help creating a good healthy living environment for everyone where students will learn to be advisable and dogged for what they are doing. For an instance, there are number of organisations involved in social activities helping people from all over the world, be it be young children, women, war affected victims, labours and so on. Working from the initial level in university will contribute students to move forward in life and be perspicacious towards the aim of serving.
Thus, an idea of providing resources and funds for sports and social activities as much as libraries and classes is definitely appreciable. It is beneficial for every students where they will be able to understand life in appropriate sense. Only theoretical knowledge cannot help us grow. The need of practical knowledge is the most. So, I want to conclude that for the overall development of the students, education, sports and social activities are to be taken hand-in-hand.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: hosts
...ve equal financial support. There are a host of benefits of sports and social works ...
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...s have been taken as the bridge between hundred of nations. For instance, the Olympics ...
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Suggestion:
...ce, the Olympics games. In the same way, the rigorous work done during sports hel...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to create' or 'create'.
Suggestion: to create; create
...universities and colleges. It will help creating a good healthy living environment for e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 41.0 15.1003584229 272% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3255.0 1977.66487455 165% => OK
No of words: 655.0 407.700716846 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96946564885 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05894927669 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67599924726 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 212.727598566 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473282442748 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1014.3 618.680645161 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 43.0 20.6003584229 209% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.376408579 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6976744186 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2325581395 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23255813953 5.45110844103 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152584564368 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394073604224 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854967355328 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111950990093 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568238199296 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 86.8835125448 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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