The healthy is the most important as knowledge. There is no shortage of debate about the important of sports and social activites. In my opinion, I prefer to allocate the financial support to sports activies equal class and libraries. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
One reason that, statement is the university have to make connection of students, which is building connection by team working like sport and social activities. If the students have the activites that play together, they can easily to know each other. then Sport and Social activities of university can make relationship of students.
My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in university in Bangkok, I join a lot of social activity in university then I can make realationship with friend who study in another field . Moreover, I can exchange my experience to my friend who I know with social activity. Now I have been close friend.
Accordingly, I think this sport and social investment in the university make students a incredible life.
Another reason that, statement is the exercise and social activites can improve mindset and emotion. When you have more stressed in class room, you want to release it out. So, the other activites in the university can reduce it freshly.
For example, When I was in university in Bangkok, My friend who study in my field, Indrustrial Engineer, have problem about pressure in the class room. So him problem make him want to be alone and really bad. However, the university have social activities like CSR - Corporate social responsibility, which is help him to join the social activity with friend. As the result, he is better than before because he can release him problem with friend like me.
In conclusion, I strongly believe the sport and social activities investment make perfect students from univerity. This is because building relationship and improving mindset and emotion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, for example, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03987730061 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83845065603 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475460122699 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8616641682 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2380952381 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5238095238 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1968916462 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636360368943 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523158068424 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105245684047 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313641909765 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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